The sections on rhythm and harmony were a bit complicated but seem to make good sense. I would mostly like to see something
on melody, possibly on counterpoint and polyphony.
Three sections on melody are now ready -
The Metrics of a melody (choice of note values), Melo-Rhythm,
Chord Patterns on which melodies are built, Melo-Harmony,
The Orbits in a melody (choice of the notes themselves), Melo-Lines.
Polyphony (although the word itself is not used) is already present in the Natural Canons
which you will find in the Voice-leading section in the Transformations of Harmony.
We don't want to discourage you, but Melody is not simple.
Make sure you have seen enough Rhythm and Harmony first.